I just had a revelation for the piece I'm working on. I suddenly realized that it was wrong. I'm not entirely sure what I can do to fix it yet, but that'll come. The problem is that at least a third of the page was just bare, even accounting for the pinstriping to come later, it was just too bare.

I'm just sketching some fixes for it now. The golden rule when trying to redesign something is 'draw anything except whats already drawn'. As long as I sketch away from the direction I know is wrong my chances of finding a better way are very much improved.